I like the movies from the USA.The first movie in the world is on December 28,1985.The old movies are only with white and dark,but with the improvement of the technology,the movies today are colorful and more delicate than before.We can even watch a 3D or 4D movies nowadays. The movies have lots of sorts of stories, including action,romantic,and horror movies.Each kinds of movie can give us different feelings. Watching movies can really enjoy me a lot.If I want to relax for a while,watching a movie is alwsys the first choice to me.By the way,lots of movie stars are handsome and beautiful.l hope one day I can visit Hollywood.
Japanese animation(anime) is one of the most popular cultural exports. Anime arose in the early 20th century, the earliest Japanese animation is Katsudō Shashin, a two-minute work by an unknown creator. With the growth of technology, the stories are become more and more abundant and interesting. Anime are eagerly consumed around the world in recent years. Many people express a particular interest towards Japanese animation and even develop some ‘’animation cultures’’, such as cosplay, ACG and Dōjin. I have seen lots of animes and my favorite one is Spirited Away, a Studio Ghibli production directed by Hayao Miyazaki. It is an enchanting, touching, and magical fairy tale that really appeals to me a lot, I always want to watch it again. Ruby
1.the stories are become more and more - becoming 2.最好用Manga 代表日本漫畫 3. really appeals to me a lot- 綴字太多 又是 really, appeal , a lot 都是相似的 4.最後一句 , I always want to watch it again. 前面的逗點要和誰連?
I like Korean idol. They are not only handsome but also good at singing and dancing. One of my favorite band is CNBLUE.The member who named Jung Yong-Hwa writes the lyrics and songs by himself. JJ is his good friend.They write songs together. Both of they have a charming voice,unique style of singing, and superior appearance. The melody they write is beautiful. The lyrics are written thrilling. When I listen to their songs, I feel relaxed and in a good mood. That's why I love them so much.
1.Both of they have a charming voice- 詞性錯誤 2.,unique style of singing, and superior appearance. - 斷句無法和主句連 3. are written thrilling - 用 are trilling 就好 4.你主題偏到聽CNBLUE 的歌, 要把他導到 culture export , 要寫出這種music 也是 文化 的一種 以及有什麼影響
I like the culture in Japan.There are many reasons. First is that there are many kinds of food there.Matcha is one of special food in Japan.It can be made for matcha ice cream ,matcha milk candy，etc.
Second is their kimono. Originally, "kimono" was the Japanese word for clothing. But in more recent years, the word has been used to refer specifically to traditional Japanese clothing. Kimonos as we know them today came into being during the Heian period
Third, I like J-pop in Japan.J-pop means popular music in Japan.For instance, AKB48,Alashi...are known by most people.
To me,my favorite singer is Intano Tomomi who is one of AKB48's members. Because she is not only cute but also singing well.
American movies and music have done very well in some countries like Sweden and less well in others like India. I perfer listening to electronic and party musics which are made by DJs. This kind of music became popular in music domain by the 1990s because of the advent of affordable music technology. It includes many varieties and ranges from art music to popular forms such as electronic dance music. There are some famous DJs such as Afrojack and Armin vas Buuren. I listen to their music for it's strong sence of rhythm
American culture has affected Taiwan for a long time. The USA music is popular in Taiwan. I like old songs and new songs. Most of the old songs are lyric. While I am upset, I usually listen to music. Listening to American songs makes me feel relax and comfortable. My favorite group is Backstreet Boys. There are five members in the group. They are not the new generationsingers, but both of their old songs and new songs are excellent. I have even bought their record. I really like them, and I hope I can go to their concert one day.
Italian foods like pizza or spaghetti are famous on the world. we can see they in many restaurants,and it also become an associations for West restaurants.For example, when we want to eat some spaghettis we will think about West restaurant instead of Chinese,and its an essential food in many West restaurants.But there is one thing which makes me surprise spaghettis history.Its about Marco Polo who traveled to China and brang flour back to the Europe,and this flour became the first spaghetti on the world.Until now,I finally know the first spaghetti is made by Chinese flour its really interesting.
1. famous on the world - in the world 才對 2. we can see they in many - see them.. 3. it also become an associations- 三單錯, 4.its an essential - it is an .. 5.But there is one thing which makes me surprise spaghettis history-改成 .. surprise is the history of spaghetti 6.Its about Marco Polo - It is about ... 7. its really interesting 另起一句
American sports has affected the whole generation after the 1970s. People from Asia to Africa are playing basketball,football,or other famous sports in the USA.Nearly 150 countries are broadcasting NBA and MLB games every day.People spend more than ten billion dollars to buy shirts,caps,and shoes every years.And these leagues also became the top league in the world which every athlete wants to be a part of them.
I'm a big fan of NBA. I also start to watch MLB and NFL these days and still try to learn how to play football.Sports really changed my life, and I believe the whole world has been changed by these great American sports.
I like Korean idol.They are good at singing and dancing.I like the group named EXO.Their music are catchy.Each of the members have distinguishing feature or quality.Most of them are from Koreans,and there are two members from China,but they can speak Korean well.To debut,they have been practiced for more than two years.They are charming on the stage,and they are hilarious in privately.If I watch their video,my bad mood will be vanished immediately.Therefore,I like them very much. I am Nini
1.Each of the members have distinguishing feature..要用單數 2.are from Koreans 寫成是韓國人不就好了嗎 are Koreans 3.If I watch their video,my bad mood will be vanished immediately.Therefore,I like them very much. 兩句無法貫連 請定義清處
I like the movies from the USA.The first movie in the world is on December 28,1985.The old movies are only with white and dark,but with the improvement of the technology,the movies today are colorful and more delicate than before.We can even watch a 3D or 4D movies nowadays.
回覆刪除The movies have lots of sorts of stories, including action,romantic,and horror movies.Each kinds of movie can give us different feelings.
Watching movies can really enjoy me a lot.If I want to relax for a while,watching a movie is alwsys the first choice to me.By the way,lots of movie stars are handsome and beautiful.l hope one day I can visit Hollywood.
黑白片用black and white
刪除Lots of sorts 重複， all sorts of stories.會比較好。enjoy me 不對。要用人做主詞， I luxuriate in watching movie...., by the way 不太好.用besides.
Japanese animation(anime) is one of the most popular cultural exports. Anime arose in the early 20th century, the earliest Japanese animation is Katsudō Shashin, a two-minute work by an unknown creator. With the growth of technology, the stories are become more and more abundant and interesting.
回覆刪除Anime are eagerly consumed around the world in recent years. Many people express a particular interest towards Japanese animation and even develop some ‘’animation cultures’’, such as cosplay, ACG and Dōjin.
I have seen lots of animes and my favorite one is Spirited Away, a Studio Ghibli production directed by Hayao Miyazaki. It is an enchanting, touching, and magical fairy tale that really appeals to me a lot, I always want to watch it again.
Ruby
1.the stories are become more and more - becoming
刪除2.最好用Manga 代表日本漫畫
3. really appeals to me a lot- 綴字太多 又是 really, appeal , a lot 都是相似的
4.最後一句 , I always want to watch it again. 前面的逗點要和誰連?
I like Korean idol. They are not only handsome but also good at singing and dancing. One of my favorite band is CNBLUE.The member who named Jung Yong-Hwa writes the lyrics and songs by himself. JJ is his good friend.They write songs together. Both of they have a charming voice,unique style of singing, and superior appearance. The melody they write is beautiful. The lyrics are written thrilling. When I listen to their songs, I feel relaxed and in a good mood. That's why I love them so much.
回覆刪除1.Both of they have a charming voice- 詞性錯誤
刪除2.,unique style of singing, and superior appearance. - 斷句無法和主句連
3. are written thrilling - 用 are trilling 就好
4.你主題偏到聽CNBLUE 的歌, 要把他導到 culture export , 要寫出這種music 也是 文化 的一種 以及有什麼影響
I like the culture in Japan.There are many reasons. First is that there are many kinds of food there.Matcha is one of special food in Japan.It can be made for matcha ice cream ,matcha milk candy，etc.
回覆刪除Second is their kimono. Originally, "kimono" was the Japanese word for clothing. But in more recent years, the word has been used to refer specifically to traditional Japanese clothing. Kimonos as we know them today came into being during the Heian period
Third, I like J-pop in Japan.J-pop means popular music in Japan.For instance, AKB48,Alashi...are known by most people.
To me,my favorite singer is Intano Tomomi who is one of AKB48's members.
Because she is not only cute but also singing well.
came into being - 這句不完整
刪除2.最後要引到日本的這些都是文化的一種,因為Export 所以影響你,也愛上他們, 甚至進一步會想去這個國家旅遊
American movies and music have done very well in some countries like Sweden and less well in others like India. I perfer listening to electronic and party musics which are made by DJs. This kind of music became popular in music domain by the 1990s because of the advent of affordable music technology. It includes many varieties and ranges from art music to popular forms such as electronic dance music. There are some famous DJs such as Afrojack and Armin vas Buuren. I listen to their music for it's strong sence of rhythm
回覆刪除I am Daniel.
回覆刪除1.affordable music technology. 指的是什麼? mp3? ipod?
刪除2.講一下你為何喜歡?
American culture has affected Taiwan for a long time. The USA music is popular in Taiwan. I like old songs and new songs. Most of the old songs are lyric. While I am upset, I usually listen to music. Listening to American songs makes me feel relax and comfortable.
回覆刪除My favorite group is Backstreet Boys. There are five members in the group. They are not the new generationsingers, but both of their old songs and new songs are excellent. I have even bought their record. I really like them, and I hope I can go to their concert one day.
1. I like old songs and new songs. 加上 American old songs and new songs 會比較明確
刪除Italian foods like pizza or spaghetti are famous on the world. we can see they in many restaurants,and it also become an associations for West restaurants.For example, when we want to eat some spaghettis we will think about West restaurant instead of Chinese,and its an essential food in many West restaurants.But there is one thing which makes me surprise spaghettis history.Its about Marco Polo who traveled to China and brang flour back to the Europe,and this flour became the first spaghetti on the world.Until now,I finally know the first spaghetti is made by Chinese flour its really interesting.
回覆刪除1. famous on the world - in the world 才對
刪除2. we can see they in many - see them..
3. it also become an associations- 三單錯,
4.its an essential - it is an ..
5.But there is one thing which makes me surprise spaghettis history-改成 .. surprise is the history of spaghetti
6.Its about Marco Polo - It is about ...
7. its really interesting 另起一句
American sports has affected the whole generation after the 1970s. People from Asia to Africa are playing basketball,football,or other famous sports in the USA.Nearly 150 countries are broadcasting NBA and MLB games every day.People spend more than ten billion dollars to buy shirts,caps,and shoes every years.And these leagues also became the top league in the world which every athlete wants to be a part of them.
回覆刪除I'm a big fan of NBA. I also start to watch MLB and NFL these days and still try to learn how to play football.Sports really changed my life, and I believe the whole world has been changed by these great American sports.
I'm jimmy.
應在適當的地方加上 Sport 也是文化的一種形式,而全世界這麼多國家收看,也接受了美式文化,這展現在basketball , football等比賽中
刪除I like Korean idol.They are good at singing and dancing.I like the group named EXO.Their music are catchy.Each of the members have distinguishing feature or quality.Most of them are from Koreans,and there are two members from China,but they can speak Korean well.To debut,they have been practiced for more than two years.They are charming on the stage,and they are hilarious in privately.If I watch their video,my bad mood will be vanished immediately.Therefore,I like them very much.
回覆刪除I am Nini
1.Each of the members have distinguishing feature..要用單數
刪除2.are from Koreans 寫成是韓國人不就好了嗎 are Koreans
3.If I watch their video,my bad mood will be vanished immediately.Therefore,I like them very much. 兩句無法貫連 請定義清處